What is a Thesis Statement?

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- tells the readers what you are going to talk about in your essay or your speech

- a sentence in the beginning of the essay or the speech, usually the end of the first paragraph

- make after collecting enough evidence of a topic of a essay or a speech

- makes a claim that others might dispute

- things each paragraph contain


  1. Tsunamis

    Tsunamis is a threat to human as it damages coastal areas environmentally and economically by causing great loss of lives and property damage.

  2. Nuclear energy

    Nuclear energy has caused a boost in India’s economy.

  3. Cell phones

    The development have changed how people face the world: how they communicate and obtain information.

  4. Air pollution

    Air pollution has been a big problem humans faced in the recent 20 years as it directly affects people’s health.

  5. Video games

    Students are so addicted to the little games that parents have to stop their children playing the game in all ways they could think about.

  6. Fear

    Fear is always something people try not to show, but it is quite useful.

  7. Going to College

    A college education is not the right choice for everyone as some student graduate from the college have limited job opportunities.

  8. Marriage rituals around the world

    Most of the rituals varies in different places around the world depending on their location, climate and culture.

  9. The lives of ants

    These little creatures are often mistaken by people as less and less people get to live in a natural environment.

  10. DNA

    The discovery of DNA is a huge step people had made in the chemistry and biology world.

Detailed Planning -- Fear


Are you afraid of the dark? Have you ever screamed when you see a spider? These are common signs of fear in people’s life. Fear is always something people try not to show, but it is quite useful. In this speech, I am going to talk about the usefulness of fear.

Body paragraph 1:

Firstly, fear helps you to stay safe. Fear is often thought as a sign of cowardice, being “not brave”, and people usually do not show it in front of others. However, it is defined as the feeling induced by perceived danger or threat. When you are feeling afraid, there must be something that you think is potentially dangerous, and your instinct of being afraid helps you to stay away from it. For example, when you are in the dark, you cannot see the things around you clearly, so you think that you will run into something or something is going to jump out. Therefore, you walk slowly, and that will prevent you from knocking onto the sharp edge of a table or stepping on a toy on the floor. When you see a spider, you are afraid that this strange little creature will do some unexpected things that hurt you. Therefore you run from it, which reduce the chance of you being bit by the spider.

Body paragraph 2:

Secondly, fear helps you to improve yourself. When you fear for something about yourself, it is probably your weakness, and you think that it makes you not strong enough for the things you are encountering and you will want to improve yourself to make yourself stronger. For example, when you are fear for a math test, it is very possible that you are not so good at math or you think that you do not have enough time to prepare for it. Now, fear will be your motivation to improve your math so you won’t be so scared next time when you have a math test.

Body paragraph 3:

Thirdly, fear makes your life more interesting. If there is not fear in life, everything is in your comfort zone, everything will be the same everyday and it will be so boring. On the other hand, when you have something to fear about, you have an aim to be accomplish. For example, if you have a school trip that need you to walk on muddy roads and streams full of leeches, you might be very scared at first, but when you get involved in it and finally come back from the trip alive, you will find it so exciting and will gain the happiness from overcome challenges, going over your comfort zone.


Above are three ways which fear is useful to us: it helps you to stay safe, to improve yourself and makes your life more interesting. It is indispensible in our lives. Can you even imagine a world without fear?

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